Pass Sound has not been missed to balance out across shots. Jump cuts are present in the train station scene as well as including poor footage such as zooms. The chase does have a sense of pace and continuity is relatively flowing later – it becomes confusing as the narrative has her being kidnapped then running? You ought to use transitions to show that these are flashbacks etc – it becomes night then day? Some match on actions evident showing some sophistication. The edit was completed in a reasonable timescale.
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ReplyDeleteSound has not been missed to balance out across shots. Jump cuts are present in the train station scene as well as including poor footage such as zooms. The chase does have a sense of pace and continuity is relatively flowing later – it becomes confusing as the narrative has her being kidnapped then running? You ought to use transitions to show that these are flashbacks etc – it becomes night then day? Some match on actions evident showing some sophistication. The edit was completed in a reasonable timescale.