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Assessment 1

1. Add more examples of videos to elaborate on
2. Use of terminology in bold
3. Use of punctuation

Assessment 2

1. Use of terminology in bold
2. Need greater explanation of purpose in relation to Music and Visuals (beat editing) and lyrics and visuals (Lip synching)
3. Relate to examples

Assessment 3

1. High angle, why would Lil Wayne use it (explain)
2. Why canted angles are used
3. More specific about the success of the summer music video. 

Assessment 4

1. Use of terminology in bold
2. Relate to more examples
3. Relate to notes

Assessment 5

1. Elaborate more about intertextual refrences 
2. Explain how your idea will enhance the image of your artist
3. Justify how it is 'on-trend' to the genre